Do You See It?

It was one of their first evenings in the new apartment.

“You can always find beauty wherever you are on planet earth,” Hal said all philosophical like.

“Yes, the sunset is gorgeous,” Tina said. “That shade of pink-orange and the subtle peach…”

PHOTO PROMPT © Roger Bultot

Hal chuckled.

“That’s not what I’m talking about.”

“The bridge? Yes, the suspension bridge a marvel of science.”

“Uh, no. Wrong again.”

Tina tried to stay quiet but didn’t she know him well enough to get it right?

“The river, how it flows?”

“No silly,” he said touching her on the cheek. “It’s your reflection in the window.”


Yes, people it’s another 100 word, photo prompted story created as part of Rochelle Wisoff-Fields Friday Fictioneers challenge. Hop over to her blog to read all the amazing stories one picture can inspire.


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12 responses to “Behold the Beauty”

  1. Laurie Bell Avatar

    Awwwwwwww
    I love a happy story. This one gets you right in the feels. Well done.

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      CGraith

      Thanks Laurie!

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  2. msjadeli Avatar

    How romantic is that. The words and the touch would be enough to kindle a mighty flame.

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  3. authorfleurl Avatar

    That’s SO sweet!

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  4. Nobbinmaug Avatar

    Ah, to be young and in love. Or at least one of the two.

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  5. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    That’s SO romantic!

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    1. CGraith Avatar
      CGraith

      Yes, indeed.

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  6. Bill Avatar

    A cute story. Very nice. 🙂

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      CGraith

      Thanks!

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  7. Iain Kelly Avatar

    Hal is a charmer 😉

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  8. granonine Avatar

    Aww. Way to win her heart 🙂

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