File 1287 – Gala Mall Storekeeper’s account

 

There’s a path of streaked laminate.

It runs all the way through the mall,

It ends in my cubby hole store.

It may look like a tea and herb shop,

But this is where the Traders come.

That’s what they call themselves.

They bring rare finds from the forests,

They come for sterile needles, gauze, stitches.

They package their wares in something like papyrus.

My only complaint is, when they walk out of the store,

They’re gone.

I mean they vanish.

Happens every time.

Even when the crowds aren’t there to swallow them up.

Weird right?

Now, where’s my reward?


This story is brought to you by Rochelle Wisoff’s Friday Fictioneers. In fact the photo prompt is © Rochelle Wisoff-Fields! A double dose of gratitude goes her way.

This piece is a side story of my upcoming, novel, “Children of the Hidden”. The first ten pages are actually with a publisher for review. Here’s hoping the story is snapped up by a traditional publisher. Meanwhile I’m pursuing the self-publishing world which my friends, is a planet of information and actions to be successful!

Write on! May your day follow a path to joy or at least a good cup of coffee! Best, Clare


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27 responses to “Interview with Eyewitness to the Hidden”

  1. R.M. Carlson Avatar

    Here’s hoping you find just the right publisher! Much luck!

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  2. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Clare,

    Sounds like an interesting novel. All the best finding the right publisher.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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      CGraith

      Many thanks Rochelle!

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  3. Dawn M. Miller Avatar

    Good luck with the publishing. It seems you may have something here.

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      CGraith

      Many thanks Dawn!

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  4. Nobbinmaug Avatar

    This is a very intriguing side story. It gives me Terminator or Blade Runner vibes. Good luck with the publisher.

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    Anonymous

    Very mysterious. And best of luck with your novel!

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      CGraith

      Many thanks!

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  6. Laurie Bell Avatar

    Weird indeed. I’m hooked. Where do they go? I want more.

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      CGraith

      I’ll be sure to alert everyone when the book is coming out. Thanks!

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  7. GHLearner Avatar

    What a great little slice of your book-world. It’s very intriguing, and also promising. It reads like the kind of stories I like to read. Good luck with the publishing.

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  8. authorfleurl Avatar

    Very intriguing! Good luck with your new book 🙂

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  9. Margaret Avatar

    Very mysterious. The ‘Traders’ have me intrigued. Great story, and good luck with the book.

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      CGraith

      Many thanks Margaret! The Traders will actually appear in Book 2 of the series!

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  10. msjadeli Avatar

    Fascinating concept, Clare. I hope the publishers know a good thing when they see it. 

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      CGraith

      Many thanks! I appreciate your confidence in my writing!

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  11. plaridel Avatar

    think positive. i suppose the reward will be in the mail soon. :)

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  12. neilmacdon Avatar

    Good luck with the submission, Clare

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      CGraith

      Many thanks Neil. It’s a tiny potential opportunity but it’s I’ve got right now!

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  13. granonine Avatar

    Best wishes on your book! This is indeed an intriguing little slice of your story 🙂

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      CGraith

      It’s helpful to know what catches people’s interest, thanks for the comment and wishes!

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  14. James McEwan Avatar

    Good luck with the book. Mystical traders from the deep forest sounds like the mysterious fantasy of goblins and fairies.

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      CGraith

      Thank you James!

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  15. justjoyfulness Avatar

    Very fascinating story well written. All the best for finding a compatible publisher. Is this your first novel to be published?

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      CGraith

      Thank you ‘Joy’ ! Yes this will be my debut novel but I’ve got a few more waiting in the wings for me to get serious about publishing.

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  16. elmowrites Avatar

    Good luck on the publishing hunt, I’ll cross my fingers for you. There’s a lot of intrigue in this ‘side story’ and it bodes well for the rest!

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      CGraith

      Thank you! I appreciate your supportive comment!

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