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“No sane girl should dream about marriage. It’s oppressive to women.”
“In the 1950s maybe.” Elle paused at the Thrift store window. “Marriage is a public declaration of love.”
“Really? Half the high school is married then. Would be right for divorce to be a public declaration of not love.”
“Divorce doesn’t always mean people don’t love each other.”
“It’s all about wanting the government to recognize voluntary family. And we all know family does not require love. There’s no divorce with real family.”
“Sister, I love you and I’m sorry about you and Joe.”
“He is dead to me.”

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15 responses to “Love, Not Love, Who Knows? 100 Word”

  1. Vartika Avatar

    Divorce generate bitterness in people. Nicely done

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  2. Anita Avatar

    That’s life.
    Facts wisely communicated in story.

    Here’s my story-
    Are You There? – Anita

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      CGraith

      Thank you Anita! I appreciate the comment.

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  3. granonine Avatar

    As a retired therapist, I find this excellent post both sad and realistic. Your writing is outstanding, and the truth of the conversation is quite real. Which is what makes me sad.

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      CGraith

      Thank you for your comment. You have encouraged me (about writing) and thankfully the conversation is purely fiction.

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  4. Margaret Avatar

    Lots of issues touched on here in a lively and engaging dialogue. Good ending that ties it all together beautifully.

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      CGraith

      Thanks Margaret. People are complicated and sometimes their words give a glimpse into that.

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  5. msjadeli Avatar

    I feel sorry for how the split has colored her world in dark shades. One day she may see light again.

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  6. Bill Avatar

    I have several friends who identify their X’s by number: X-1, X-2, X-etc. One has an X-redux. I wonder if Joe will be assigned a number some day. I enjoyed this. 🙂

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      CGraith

      Thanks Bill, I’m glad you enjoyed it.

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  7. pennygadd51 Avatar

    What a mixture of emotions Elle’s sister is experiencing, as she tries to come to terms with her divorce from Joe. You’ve very effectively used the contrast between a reasoned, if extreme, view of marriage, and the grief she now feels. Well done!

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  8. neilmacdon Avatar

    I liked the way you bring out her backstory right at the end

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      CGraith

      Thanks Neil.

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  9. Iain Kelly Avatar

    I think she’s taking the split with Joe quite badly…

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    1. CGraith Avatar
      CGraith

      Yes, indeed she is.

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