There was a boat that floated up and down the river,

On deck, music played

Dancers swayed,

Beer and wine flowed,

Margaritas were balanced on trays,

Offered from dusk to dawn.

A party boat,

Most said.

A party indeed.

But the real party was below,

where  microscopic AI creatures were synthesized,

A delicate three month process.

The night the mind controlling bots,

were to be released like a great salmon spawn,

I carried out my plan,

an unseen foe.

A targeted EMP and a ghastly explosion, did a spectacular job.

A tragic end to the party, but humanity was saved.


 This 100 word story is brought to you by Friday Fictioneers photo challenge put forth at Rochelle Wisoff’s blog. The photo is credited to Rodger Bultot.

It’s an interesting photo. I wasn’t sure what it was all about which left a lot of room for imagination to take hold. Hop over to Rochelle’s blog to connect and read all the other stories that come out of this scene.

That’s all I’ve got today!

Hey, and don’t drink the water, it’s spoiled…maybe. Best, Clare.

(Does anyone else remember that line in the “Little Rascal’s” show? It was milk but you get the idea).

 


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17 responses to “Sorry The Party’s Over”

  1. Lisa or Li Avatar

    p.s. good title also!

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    1. CGraith Avatar
      CGraith

      Thanks!

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  2. Lisa or Li Avatar

    I’m glad the MC was watching and waiting until the right moment to neutralize the threat!

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  3. Dawn M. Miller Avatar

    This certainly makes you think.

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  4. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Clare,

    I’m all for the good guys winning. If humans are indeed the good guys? Well done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. CGraith Avatar
      CGraith

      An interesting question…maybe humans as a whole are not the good guys but there are some among us who deserve that title.

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  5. Laurie Bell Avatar

    Oooo this is a fabulous set up and pay off. No one will know but us. Well done. A tasty sci fi here

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  6. Dale Avatar

    When the party is good, there is no reason to see what’s going on in the bottom… Nicely done, Clare.

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    1. CGraith Avatar
      CGraith

      Thanks, Dale!

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  7. Neil MacDonald Avatar

    Curses! Foiled again!

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    1. CGraith Avatar
      CGraith

      So it was you!! Ha ha. Till next time.

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  8. James Pyles Avatar

    For a second, I didn’t think humanity was going to make it with the microscopic AIs around.

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    1. CGraith Avatar
      CGraith

      Yeah, it would have been bad if mind controlling bots took over…then again that would explain a lot of things…lol

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  9. plaridel Avatar

    wow, i didn’t expect it would end like that. but, well done. 🙂

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      CGraith

      Many thanks, the good guys have to win sometimes!

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  10. MrBinks Avatar
    MrBinks

    I enjoyed the mystery of this.

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    1. CGraith Avatar
      CGraith

      I’m glad. I would hate to be predictable!

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