PHOTO PROMPT © Rochelle Wisoff-Fields

It collects, you know.

Not because you want it to,

but if you’re not careful,

a few short tempered words here,

a few times don’t bother to call there,

a few times holding back an apology, they’re just too sensitive,

so why encourage that?

Lazy relating,

like tossing the empty hamburger wrapper,

to the back seat.

No big deal.

But it collects.

Until it’s a pile,

Not pretty.

Be careful.

It’s a chore to reconnect,

to convince that you care,

to be a part of their life.

Cause if you look straight ahead,

you won’t see what you left behind.

 


 

 This weeks Friday Fictioneer photo challenge from Rochelle-Wisoff’s web-site is a graphic photo inspiring writers to tell the tale of a ‘junk car’. Follow the link to read those tales!

Relationships take time and energy and discomfort and whole lot of other things that if you don’t pay attention, you could let slide by and sit comfortably, quiet, self-absorbed and probably call yourself happy. And then you die. Yeah, so don’t write off the people in your life! You need them. They need you and life expands when we walk to the trash can and put the junk where it belongs.

Happy, happy, joy, joy! Give it a go and see what happens!

Best, Clare

 


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19 responses to “No Big Deal”

  1. Nobbinmaug Avatar

    You had me at “Happy, happy, joy, joy!” I can’t resist a good Ren & Stimpy reference.

    Great take and true words.

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      CGraith

      Glad you liked that! It’s my favorite phrase from R&S.

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  2. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Clare,

    Brilliant last lines. Love your take on the prompt.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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      CGraith

      Many thanks Rochelle!

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      CGraith

      Thanks Dawn!

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  3. Laurie Bell Avatar

    Damn!
    Brilliant

    Each little piece gathers until it is an insurmountable pile. Well done on this one.

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    1. CGraith Avatar
      CGraith

      Thank you Laurie! Just speaking from experience…learning soon enough I think to stay connected.

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  4. Lisa or Li Avatar

    Clare I like the form your caveat took and your afterword. We do need each other.

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    1. CGraith Avatar
      CGraith

      Thanks Lisa Li! I have to make myself stay connected because it’s too easy for me to duck into my writing and feel as though it doesn’t really matter.

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      1. Lisa or Li Avatar

        You’re very welcome.

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  5. plaridel Avatar

    excellent use of metaphor. i wish i could be as good as you.

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  6. GHLearner Avatar

    Wonderful writing, and so true!

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      CGraith

      Many thanks GH!

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  7. Neil MacDonald Avatar

    I love the metaphor here

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      CGraith

      Thanks Neil!

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  8. Violet Lentz Avatar

    Very clever take on the prompt.

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    1. CGraith Avatar
      CGraith

      Thank you Violet! It’s a fun photo to ponder on.

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