Landing in an unknown sea,

The data from our probe can’t be analyzed fast enough.

Our ship bobs in gentle waves that we hope will not degrade our hull.

Prelim results show water, salt, organic matter and,

A substance we can’t identify but suspect is toxic.

We wonder if that substance is why

On the shore there is an unwelcoming sight.

Remnants of a life form reach out like ghosts as though warning us.


PHOTO PROMPT © Lisa Fox

We may skip this planet rather than expose ourselves.

Clearly the sea is deadly.

We’ll set our sights on its moon and mine it instead.


This week’s 100 word story brought to you by the photo prompt at Rochelle Wisoff’s Friday Fictioneers. The photo is compliments of Lisa Fox. The inspiration is from a series I’m reading: “Bobiverse” by Dennis Taylor. It’s a great series if you like space fiction, VR and science fiction. It is an imaginative story line with multiple worlds presented as humanity searches for livable planets. It has a good dose of humor, so not too serious and yet it is not lacking meaning.


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13 responses to “Ghosts of a Dead Sea”

  1. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Clare,

    It seems that someone was looking out for them. Well done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  2. Shweta Suresh Avatar

    A very good cautionary tale. Hopefully our planet won’t turn out like this in the future.

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      CGraith

      Thank you Shweta! I appreciate your following my blog!

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      1. Shweta Suresh Avatar

        It’s my pleasure. I love to read flash fiction 🙂

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        CGraith

        And I love to write it! Thanks.

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  3. plaridel Avatar

    great, i suppose it pays to play safe. 🙂

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  4. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    Well, that’s a relief! Nice one.

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      CGraith

      Thanks Keith

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  5. msjadeli Avatar

    I like your interpretation of the driftwood. It does look like it’s trying to get someone’s attention.

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  6. James McEwan Avatar

    Fun story that explains the reason aliens have avoided visits to our planet.

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  7. Neil MacDonald Avatar

    Oh that works on so many levels! Lovely!

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      CGraith

      Thank you Neil!

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  8. justjoyfulness Avatar

    Oh shucks. Although I suspect our planet is headed that way. Great cautionary tale.

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