Don’t come back.

Up went a soft looking fence adorned with legal phrases like,

“No admission of liability” and “this represents a voluntary agreement”.

‘Voluntary’ forged into a weapon,

Take this or immediate financial distress;

Food for your kids,

Meds for your spouse,

Just sign the papers and be done with it.

Walk away from the party beyond the gate.

©DaleRogerson

The mirth of a desk within the cement walls.

Walls painted with the color of joy,

Plastered with signs saying “We care.”

Business doesn’t care.

So I won’t walk up those stairs anymore,

But I also won’t live the lie.


 

 It’s interesting how no matter the photo, the state of mind distills out a story from its library of thoughts. Not so much a story as a commentary in disguise actually.

This photo prompted 100 word story is brought to you by Rochelle Wisoff’s Friday Fictioneer’s challenge. Check out her web-site for a glimpse in to the minds of random writers.

Meanwhile may you find a party on either side of the fence!

Best, Clare


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27 responses to “Not Invited Back”

  1. Heather Musk Avatar

    It’s sad how true this rings with so many. A thought-provoking take on the prompt, thank you.

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    1. CGraith Avatar
      CGraith

      Thank you Heather!

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    Anonymous

    I don’t think there ever was a time when employees were seen as anything other than a disposable work force. Painting walls and providing free coffee and game rooms just adds to the illusion of caring. Great commentary.

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  3. Nobbinmaug Avatar

    It blows my mind how much of themselves people give to companies to which they’re just a number. I understand work ethic and the desire to succeed, but I just wish we could all do put those into improving ourselves instead of heartless corporations. Good one!

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  4. Dawn M. Miller Avatar

    I think most of us know this feeling.

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  5. granonine Avatar

    The more you “give” the people, the more you can take from them. Government-created dependency is certainly a lie.

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  6. Laurie Bell Avatar

    You have told this tale brilliantly. That realisation of corporate greed and lack of heart. A sobering moment

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    1. CGraith Avatar
      CGraith

      Thanks! I’ll try to keep it light next time!

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  7. James McEwan Avatar

    Where is the balance? Care for honest employees and protection against the malicious intentions of trouble makers-sometimes it becomes an over kill.

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    1. CGraith Avatar
      CGraith

      You are more optimistic than I giving the company a misguided but well intentioned purpose when it’s more like a budget adjusting practice to let people go to correct mistakes made in spending. I’m a bit jaded after decades of corporate life!

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      1. James McEwan Avatar

        Yes, I understand that without progress and acknowledgment, I know how you feel.

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  8. Margaret Avatar

    I like that your narrator is determined to find a way to live how he/she wants to, and resists the powers that wish to control and limit. You’ve shown the despair and the eventual resistance of your MC in the tone of your story.

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    1. CGraith Avatar
      CGraith

      Thanks Margaret! The MC must always overcome in one way or another.

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  9. elmowrites Avatar

    My husband’s company had a ‘we care’ program that supported staff in need during the worst of the pandemic. Except it was funded entirely through voluntary contributions by the rest of the staff. Not so much ‘the company cares’ as ‘the company is hoping you care for each other’.

    So yes, this hits a nerve!

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    1. CGraith Avatar
      CGraith

      Maybe once upon a time, company’s really did consider their employees as a community. Now, the stark reality is that people are just another asset, to be manipulated and played in whichever way the game of profit demands. An ultimate truth veiled by nice words, ‘mission statements’ and PR that takes the good deeds of their workers and claims it is about the company’s values. It all goes out the window in a split second if the business needs more money. Everyone is supposed to swallow that bitter pill because, of course, how else will the books be balanced…can’t be by managing finances well in the first place. Sigh. Thanks for the comment. Clearly a hundred words is not sufficient!

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  10. msjadeli Avatar

    Hard to distinguish this from that anymore. If you can grasp anything, use it as an anchor. Evocative story.

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    1. CGraith Avatar
      CGraith

      So true! Anchors aweigh!

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  11. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    Business doesn’t care, how true is that?

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    1. CGraith Avatar
      CGraith

      The very nature of the word ‘business’ implies a lack of emotional connection.

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  12. plaridel Avatar

    such is life. 😦

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  13. Iain Kelly Avatar

    It’s a wonder we believe anything anyone tells us anymore, it’s hard to believe either the public or private corporate leaders.

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    1. CGraith Avatar
      CGraith

      The only sure things are taxes, death and business need rules the workforce.

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  14. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Clare,

    Second attempt to comment.

    Stark, cold reality doesn’t mesh with the cheerful lies, does it? Thought provoking piece.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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      CGraith

      Thank you Rochelle!

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  15. Dale Avatar

    A sad truth. If one is lucky enough to actually find a company with people who care… stay!

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  16. neilmacdon Avatar

    I like the way you rendered the lies and the fury at them

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    1. CGraith Avatar
      CGraith

      Thank you!

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