Not alone on the frigid day,

A grey haired couple walks ahead, down the pier.

Their breaths exhale as one into the frosty air.

Her purple scarf blows loose, like a flag.

PHOTO PROMPT © Peter Abbey

He reaches for it, wraps it around her,

Covering her mouth,

She laughs and nudges his side.

They stop.

I walk slow.

He reaches into his wool coat,

And brings out a handful of corn.

He throws it in the air, the seagulls go mad,

She ducks but squeals in delight.

He beams.
This is their routine every day.

I decide I must invest time in another person.


Love is in the air or at least snow is. Supposedly the Ground Hog has declared an early spring. How many are ready for flowers poking up through the frozen tundra? Exaggerating just a bit. There’s no snow where I live at the moment, much to my dismay. Today’s short tale is brought to you by Rochelle Wisoff’s Friday Fictioneers Photo prompt. The pensive prompt is courtesy of Peter Abbey. Here’s hoping that you have some inspiring people in your life even if they are strangers. Best, Clare.


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38 responses to “A Season of Love – 100 Words”

  1. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    Absolutely charming. Their fondness for each other was palpable.

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      CGraith

      Many thanks Keith!

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  2. Alicia Jamtaas Avatar

    This is delightful!. So much love in so few words.

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    Anonymous

    Companionship can be great.

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      CGraith

      Even enjoying a view of companions warms the heart.

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  4. athling2001 Avatar

    Beautiful writing. Well done.

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      CGraith

      Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed it.

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  5. The Sicilian Storyteller Avatar

    This was enchanting. Investing in another is time most well spent. Often it’s the little moments of joys shared with someone that are the most endearing and well-remembered. Lovely write!

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      CGraith

      It is the small moments the string together into a lifetime.

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    Anonymous

    Investing in another person is the best investment. What a lovely story, so beautifully written.

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      CGraith

      Many thanks!

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    Anonymous

    He should go for it. He has been lucky in love.

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  8. Michael B. Fishman Avatar

    I thought this was really beautiful. You captured the love of the couple and the melancholy of the narrator with that wonder last line. How many people, I wonder, is that thought true for? Well done!

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      CGraith

      Thank you for your kind comment!

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  9. James McEwan Avatar

    I can feel the desire to be like the happy couple and find someone to share the emotions of life. Just like them.
    I think Margaret described your story perfectly.

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      CGraith

      Thanks so much James!

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    Anonymous

    You could be writing about my husband and me–nearly 55 years together, and we have our own funny, silly, repeated interplay. Perfectly described here.

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      CGraith

      Thank you! I’m glad you liked my 100 words.

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  11. Angela Avatar

    What a beautiful image! You made me feel like I was people-watching on the pier. -Angela

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      CGraith

      Thanks Angela…they came to life as I wrote.

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  12. Dale Avatar

    Awwww, Clare, that was beautiful.
    I have to say, I love being a quiet observer of such tenderness.

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      CGraith

      Thanks Dale! There’s some good out there to see.

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      1. Dale Avatar

        That there is!

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    Anonymous

    Invest love – now there’s a good thought for Valentine’s day!

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      CGraith

      Love is an investment isn’t it?

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  14. Margaret Avatar

    Gorgeous depiction of the gestures and actions that show the connection between the two. No wonder your narrator gets a new lease of life, and hopefully love., after watching them.

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      CGraith

      Many thanks Margaret!

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  15. dorahak Avatar

    I love the way you set up the free and easy relationship between the couple, full of love and joy. A solitary onlooker would be envious indeed.

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  16. plaridel Avatar

    the last line made me think. what was that all about? 🙂

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      CGraith

      There’s no greater compliment than to inspire thought. 🙃

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  17. Anita Avatar

    Lovely feel-good story.
    Perfect for V’ Day week 🙂
    We both have the same wish for all in our stories this week- may all inspire and together create a great world!

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    Anonymous

    And it is those watershed moments that engine the human world. Beautiful story, Clare.

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      CGraith

      Thank you, I’m glad you liked it.

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  19. Sandra Avatar

    Time to love again. Always a risk in springtime. Lovely story.

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      CGraith

      Thank you Sandra!

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    MrBinks

    Nicely penned. Full of feeling.

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  21. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Clare,

    It seems we were on the same wavelength this week. 😉 Love your sweet story.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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      CGraith

      Many thanks!

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