They face each other across a small, ornate cast iron table in a secluded courtyard.

PHOTO PROMPT © Rowena Curtin

Birds sing, plants rustle in a breeze.

On the air is it Lilac? If not, some other flower blooming, broadcasting life.

“It didn’t work,” he says.

Simple words.

Her head drops, hands covering her face.

“I’m sorry,” he adds. He pushes the chair with a scrape against the brick pavement.

She doesn’t look up, but she hears his footsteps retreating, ascending stairs, disappearing into nothingness.

She is alone.

She dreams of espresso, a plate of biscuits, the sounds of others.

But it will not be.


It’s up to you to fill in the blanks for today’s short story. I only saw the stage for an important, short conversation! Have a great day everyone! Best, Clare

A prompt is just that, a nudge, sometimes gentle, sometimes explosive! For a writer whose imagination is primed, saturated, leaking even, a prompt is a welcome invitation to create. Thanks to Rochelle Wisoff’s Friday Fictioneers, we have a photo prompt courtesy of Rowena Curtin. Hop over to Rochelle’s blog to read a book’s worth of 100 word stories from the same prompt.


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20 responses to “Words No One Wants to Hear”

  1. The Sicilian Storyteller Avatar

    How very sad yet lovely. Well done!

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    1. CGraith Avatar
      CGraith

      Thank you!

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  2. authorfleurl Avatar

    Yes, this could go to so many places. I was wondering if he was a ghost…disappearing into nothingness. But a great little story and a great idea leaving us guessing!

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    1. CGraith Avatar
      CGraith

      A ghost! That’s great! I didn’t even think of that.

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      1. authorfleurl Avatar

        The more I read these 100 word stories with so many tales from one photo, it all gives me food for thought!

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      2. CGraith Avatar
        CGraith

        It is an experience to read them all!

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    Anonymous

    Thanks for the mystery. Very intriguing. This line – “It didn’t work,” he says.
    vs. It didn’t work out – or it’s not working opens up so many possibilities other than a breakup.

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  4. plaridel Avatar

    truth hurts, but she’s a tough lady. after the initial shock, she’ll move on.

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    1. CGraith Avatar
      CGraith

      Very nice thoughts!

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  5. james Avatar
    james

    There are many avenues to follow here, a bad date or an arrangement gone wrong, plus many more.

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  6. Liz Young Avatar

    Well, it’s not a complete story, but I guess he’s dumping her.

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    1. CGraith Avatar
      CGraith

      Didn’t even think of that possibility! Good one.

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  7. Tracey at Whatsfordinnerdoc.com and TraceyDelaplainMD.com Avatar

    “I’m sorry honey, they had no dinner reservations for tonight. Are you coming?”

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    1. CGraith Avatar
      CGraith

      Nice! So much gentler than some of the potential meanings!

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  8. Alicia Jamtaas Avatar

    Well, there are so many scenarios for this wee story. Thanks for letting us fill in the blanks.

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    1. CGraith Avatar
      CGraith

      You’re welcome!

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  9. elmowrites Avatar

    Ouch, there is so much pain in this, I don’t know what about but lots of ideas spring to mind and I enjoyed the mystery.

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    1. CGraith Avatar
      CGraith

      I’m glad you enjoyed it!

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  10. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Clare,

    Oh the possibilities with this storyline. It feels like the intro to something. Nicely done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. CGraith Avatar
      CGraith

      Thank you, Rochelle

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