“The human mind does not stay within lines.

It adjusts to trauma any way it can, always seeking a way to balance. You know that, right?

It was a rhetorical question, of course.

At least that’s how Kris took it.

No way would she tell her doctor that the reason she could only see in her dreams was not because of post traumatic stress, curable with time. It was that her eyes gave up on seeing atrocities and shutdown her optic nerve. Wait, that meant she did agree.

“Right.” Kris finally spoke. Her voice still worked. At least for now.


Today’s short story brought to by the photo prompt at Rochelle Wisoff- Fields Friday Fictioneer’s challenge. Check out her web-site to join the party!

PHOTO PROMPT © Dale Rogerson

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19 responses to “See No Evil – 100 Words”

  1. dorahak Avatar

    We have so many coping mechanisms against trauma and the harshness of the world. None of them are easy and come with their own price. You bring this to the fore in an exceptional write.
    ~ Dora

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      CGraith

      Thank you! I’m glad you get the point I was trying to make.

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      CGraith

      Many thanks!

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  2. msjadeli Avatar

    Accurate depiction of trauma and how some respond to it. I hope she finds a way to process it before all of her senses are gone.

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  3. Dahlia Avatar

    Very believable and well conceived

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      CGraith

      Thank you Dahlia!

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  4. Bill Avatar

    There is much for the reader in the background of this story. Well done.

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      CGraith

      Thank you Bill!

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  5. michael Avatar

    I can not find the words I need. The human mind is so complex.

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  6. James McEwan Avatar

    It is said ‘that time heals’. I am not so sure as some trauma can last generations.
    That said, you raise a lot of thoughts in your story.

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      CGraith

      Many thanks for the comment. I’m one to close my eyes during the scary parts of a movie so I’m probably at risk for this condition!

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  7. Liz Young Avatar

    I’ve heard of trauma making people mute, so I guess it could take their sight too.

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      CGraith

      That’s the beauty of fiction, in just needs to be a plausible, not proven.

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  8. Iain Kelly Avatar

    And who can blame her mind from reacting that way? But then there is much beauty to see too. nicely done.

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  9. Dale Avatar

    I actually do believe a person can shut down parts of their body. It’s an amazing machine. Well done, Clare.

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      CGraith

      Thank you Dale!

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  10. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Clare,

    The human mind is a mystery. Hysterical blindness is one coping mechanism. Well written.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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      CGraith

      Thank you Rochelle!

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