See No Evil – 100 Words

“The human mind does not stay within lines.

It adjusts to trauma any way it can, always seeking a way to balance. You know that, right?

It was a rhetorical question, of course.

At least that’s how Kris took it.

No way would she tell her doctor that the reason she could only see in her dreams was not because of post traumatic stress, curable with time. It was that her eyes gave up on seeing atrocities and shutdown her optic nerve. Wait, that meant she did agree.

“Right.” Kris finally spoke. Her voice still worked. At least for now.


Today’s short story brought to by the photo prompt at Rochelle Wisoff- Fields Friday Fictioneer’s challenge. Check out her web-site to join the party!

PHOTO PROMPT © Dale Rogerson

19 responses to “See No Evil – 100 Words”

  1. We have so many coping mechanisms against trauma and the harshness of the world. None of them are easy and come with their own price. You bring this to the fore in an exceptional write.
    ~ Dora

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    1. Thank you! I’m glad you get the point I was trying to make.

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    1. Many thanks!

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  2. Accurate depiction of trauma and how some respond to it. I hope she finds a way to process it before all of her senses are gone.

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  3. Very believable and well conceived

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    1. Thank you Dahlia!

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  4. There is much for the reader in the background of this story. Well done.

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    1. Thank you Bill!

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  5. I can not find the words I need. The human mind is so complex.

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  6. It is said ‘that time heals’. I am not so sure as some trauma can last generations.
    That said, you raise a lot of thoughts in your story.

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    1. Many thanks for the comment. I’m one to close my eyes during the scary parts of a movie so I’m probably at risk for this condition!

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  7. I’ve heard of trauma making people mute, so I guess it could take their sight too.

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    1. That’s the beauty of fiction, in just needs to be a plausible, not proven.

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  8. And who can blame her mind from reacting that way? But then there is much beauty to see too. nicely done.

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  9. I actually do believe a person can shut down parts of their body. It’s an amazing machine. Well done, Clare.

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    1. Thank you Dale!

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  10. Dear Clare,

    The human mind is a mystery. Hysterical blindness is one coping mechanism. Well written.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Thank you Rochelle!

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