Joe was a kind man, sweetly protective.
“Don’t step in the middle,” he said pointing to the bright spot on the parquet floor.
“Where the light is shining?”
“It is not safe. You’ll slip through the weave and into another dimension.”
“Joe, it’s not fabric. It’s wood.”
He waved his finger in my face. “No, no, no my dear, don’t be fooled.”
We stood at the edge. Would it help him if I proved it was safe?
He grabbed my hand.
“Believe me,” he said. “But if not, take me with you.” Then we leaped into the illumination.

Photo prompt from Friday Fictioneers at Rochellewisoff.com. Photo credits to Dale Rogerson. Follow the link to Rochelle’s blog and join the 100 word party!


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25 responses to “In the Mind of Joe – 100 word tale”

  1. granonine Avatar

    What a great take on the prompt! Leaping together into the unknown 🙂

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  2. authorfleurl Avatar

    Woooo a wormhole! Slipping into another dimension…coooool!

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      CGraith

      It could be fun.

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  3. Margaret Avatar

    ‘Into the illumination’! I love it. Take me too. Great story and such a good idea.

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      CGraith

      Thanks Margaret! Glad you enjoyed it.

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  4. Brenda's Thoughts Avatar

    A very creative story! I love how you saw the bright spot on the floor and used it.

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      CGraith

      Thank you so much for your comment!

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  5. Vartika Avatar

    You weave this story cleverly around the bright spot. Good take on prompt

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      CGraith

      Thank you Vartika!

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  6. Brenda's Thoughts Avatar

    Wow, a very intriguing story. I want to know where did they go? Great job!

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      CGraith

      Thank you Brenda. I’m glad you like my little tale.

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  7. Bernadette Braganza Avatar

    So how many more people have jumped through that bright spot?

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  8. James McEwan Avatar

    Did they land with a thumper disappear? Nice ending.

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  9. draliman Avatar

    Yikes. A new adventure is about to start, perhaps!

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  10. GHLearner Avatar

    But, but… you can’t stop there! What a great hook to a (hopefully) longer story!

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    1. CGraith Avatar
      CGraith

      Don’t encourage me to start another novel! I may just look for a bright spot on the floor and try jumping. Ha ha.

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      1. GHLearner Avatar

        😀 I’m not saying anything…

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  11. Bill Avatar

    Dear sweet Joe, if you want to keep that finger, get it out of my face. (kidding)

    Fun story.

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      CGraith

      Thanks Bill!

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  12. pennygadd51 Avatar

    That’s a clever take on the prompt, Clare.

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      CGraith

      Thanks Penny!

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  13. msjadeli Avatar

    Clare, I didn’t even notice that wormhole until I read your story. Very thrilling to wonder where it is they went.

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      CGraith

      I’m wondering myself. Thanks!

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  14. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Clare,

    Oooh, now that left me hanging. Imaginative.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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      CGraith

      Thank you Rochelle!

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