PHOTO PROMPT © Carole Erdman-Grant

How do I explain it so they understand?
“Okay everyone, road trip.”
Eight students packed in my SUV.
They’re young. They can handle crunching together.
“Look at the mountains. What do you see?”
“Umm, trees.” I hear behind me.
Laughter erupts.
“Try harder,” I say undaunted.
One answers, “muted wheat colors, except for the evergreens.”
“Yes. Muted. Perfect. Calm right? Any other words?”
“Consistent.”
“Plain.”
“Expected.”
“Exactly,” I say. “This is just the way a neuro-average person thinks.”
We come up over the hill to the abandoned, graffiti covered diner.
“That ladies and gentlemen is how different my mind works.”



This photo prompt from Rochellewisoff.com Friday Fictioneers weekly challenge is compliments of Carol Erdman-Grant. Visit Rochelle’s blog and join the fun writing a 100 word tale from a photo prompt.


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21 responses to “See My World – 100 Words”

  1. msjadeli Avatar

    Clare, what a wonderfully creative way to illustrate a concept to students. So much better than just words.

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      CGraith

      Thank you!

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      1. msjadeli Avatar

        You’re welcome!

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  2. Margaret Avatar

    Goal achieved, I’d say. What a great story. I like the image of the eight kids packed into the car, and the other small details that bring the story to life.

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      CGraith

      Thank you so much for your comment Margaret!

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  3. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    Wonderful dialogue, I could almost hear it!

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      CGraith

      Thank you very much for the comment, Keith.

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  4. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Clare,

    I’m pretty sure that’s how my mind works, too. 😉 Love the authentic dialogue.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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      CGraith

      Creative minds don’t usually follow a script! Thanks for the comment.

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  5. GHLearner Avatar

    I love this. This is the type of teaching that sticks. It reminds me of a short film I saw a while ago how an autistic person shows how overwhelming the world can be for them.

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      CGraith

      Thanks for the comment. The inspiration is based on my nephew trying to explain how different the world is for him. Not sure where on the spectrum he falls but his experience of life is not the same as most!

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    Patricia Clair

    Great piece! The description of the kids and their behavior was really authentic. Nicely done.

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      CGraith

      Thank you Patricia. I appreciate your comment.

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  7. Bill Avatar

    Oh the things we learn at the top of the hill. Well done.

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      CGraith

      Thanks Bill!

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  8. Vartika Avatar

    Teacher explained it in a terrific way. Good story

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      CGraith

      Thank you Vartika!

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  9. neilmacdon Avatar

    What a lovely demonstration and object lesson

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      CGraith

      Thank you Neil!

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  10. Iain Kelly Avatar

    An illuminating allegory. Nicely done.

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      CGraith

      Thanks Iain!

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