In honor of hardworking women caring for this generation and the next…

Photo Prompt Copyright – Lisa Fox used by permission for Friday Fictioneers at Rochellewisoff.com

On Women’s Shoulders

Trespassing was a crime,

But did it count if owned by family?

Alex pulled the grey stone out of the old structure,

Two down from the pink granite one, right where Mom had told him.

His hand touched the key and a photo;

His three aunts and mom linked by arms, the flourishing farm in the background.

Four women keeping it going for the generation after them.

Until calamity.

At sixteen Alex sent to a foster home.

Distant uncle Larry posted, “for sale”.

No one would buy.

Returning at eighteen, now with Mom’s secret stash,

Alex called the real estate.



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18 responses to “On Women’s Shoulders – A 100 Word Tale”

  1. Heather Musk Avatar

    A happy ending, although borne from calamity. I’m glad Alex is able to carry on for the family. An enjoyable read, thank you.

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  2. Margaret Avatar

    She left him a legacy. A nice welcome home for him.

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  3. James McEwan Avatar

    I like the mystery here. I wondered, why no one would buy the place from Uncle Larry?

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    1. CGraith Avatar
      CGraith

      Perhaps the locals had an opinion of absent uncle Larry who only saw dollar signs!

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  4. Bill Avatar

    Wow. Many things at work in that story. Clever.

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    1. CGraith Avatar
      CGraith

      Why thank you Bill! That is kind of you to say.

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  5. Sandra Avatar

    I love a happy ending.

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  6. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Clare,

    Quite a legacy in that stone home. All the best To Alex. Glad he knew where to look. Good one.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  7. msjadeli Avatar

    It does look like a place with a long history and a story that needs to be told.

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    1. CGraith Avatar
      CGraith

      I love the stone, such workmanship!

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  8. Dale Avatar

    Thank goodness Mom provided for Alex.

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  9. Iain Kelly Avatar

    A well woven story in 100 words, and Alex at least gets the family home back.

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    1. CGraith Avatar
      CGraith

      It’s the next generation’s turn to keep the light on.

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  10. Mason Bushell Avatar

    Nice inheritance and treasure story well done.

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    1. CGraith Avatar
      CGraith

      Thanks Mason!

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      1. Mason Bushell Avatar

        You’re welcome.

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  11. elmowrites Avatar

    I hope Alex can turn things around; I have faith!

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  12. neilmacdon Avatar

    Hope she got a good price for her own birthright

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