On the Edge of Nothing

Excerpt from the novel adaptation of the “StormWeaver“ series. Photo prompt from Rochelle Wisoff’s Friday Fictioneer’s 100 word story challenge.

The padlocked entrance opened at Adam’s touch. Inside the shadows, of a winding stair case, pocket doors half open, a bench, a mirror. Suddenly, light swirled through the darkness, glimpses of the same place, polished, fresh. He smelled lavender. He smelled dust and mildew. Under his feet carpet, no bare floor, debris crunching. Two environments. Two places. One he knew. One he should have known. The strips of bright, clean house grew wider and those of the dark, musty house thinner. Just a little more expansion and he could step right through to the light. “Adam!” Chloe’s voice pulled him back.


PHOTO PROMPT © Lisa Fox

It’s the week of ‘arbitrary make a big deal over romance’ aka Valentine’s Day. This post is not clearly about romance or is it? With only a hundred words it’s hard to tell if Chloe is mad in love with Adam and won’t lose him to the bewitched house or if she’s keeping him from escaping the dark world he’s in. Only one way to find out…keep your eye open for when the novel “The Stone-Keeper’s Error” publication date is announced which may be awhile folks since it’s still being written. 🙃

18 responses to “On the Edge of Nothing”

  1. A brilliant teaser, just enough to leave us wondering by not giving too much away!

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  2. Awesome entry. Now I want to know more.

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    1. Thank you!

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  3. Effective use of contradiction to give us a sense of Adam’s disorientation.

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    1. Thank you for that encouraging comment!

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  4. A good take – I think every place has its Ying and Yang 🙂

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  5. You’ve got me wondering now, Clare. I feel she doesn’t mean him harm, but I’ve been wrong before…

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    1. It’s like a movie trailer…glimpses of story that take you to the edge.

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  6. was she a ghost or something? i wonder. 🙂

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    1. Neither, an alternate reality…of sorts.

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  7. I like the two opposing worlds: light vs. dark, clean scent vs. musty.

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    1. Glad you got that!

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  8. Dear Clare,

    Good build of tension.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Thank you for the helpful comment Rochelle!

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  9. Bewitched house looks spooky and interesting.

    All the best for the novel.
    That looks real!

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    1. Many thanks Neil! I think trying to write the full impact of what someone is experiencing is a fun challenge.

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