They All Fall Down

Excerpt from “StormWeaver the Novel” / PHOTO PROMPT © J Hardy Carroll

She paid two hundred for a small bottle of phosphoric acid. Rose knew exactly how and where to apply the acid from reading books. Yes, that’s right, she read books, science books. Rose, the wild girl of the woods, whose mother pulled her out of school after sixth grade to tend sheep and spin wool. No one expected marriage or a respectable life from her. That is until she was blessed with the power of the stones. Now she could add to her accomplishments learning chemistry and physics, especially the physics of structures, how they remained standing, how they fell.


Today’s post is a glimpse into the novel I’m working on based on the StormWeaver series. The title is still eluding me. Read more about Rose by reading the series (category -“StormWeaver”. I share this particular piece from Rochelle-Wisoff’s Friday Fictioneer’s photo prompt challenge. Today’s photo is a gift from J.Hardy Carroll.

I’m building a beta-reading team for the novel this post is based on. It’s part fantasy, part fairytale, part family drama. If you’re interested in being a reader, please leave a comment and I’ll get in touch for next steps. Thank you so much! Clare

27 responses to “They All Fall Down”

  1. Intriguing snippet. Leaves me wanting more.

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    1. There will be more! Hopefully one day I can announce publication of the novel.

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  2. Oh, I like this! Sounds like a fascinating story, Clare. 🙂

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    1. If you would like to be a beta reader….I will have a draft ready in April…I can put you on the list. I would just be looking for overall feedback. Thanks for your encouragement though!

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      1. Yes, do put me on the list. I’m new to the writing world in my “older” years so I can give you overall feedback, not so much academic feedback. 🙂 I’m also writing a book (my first) and am hoping to be finished in the summer. The book’s main character is also a girl who lives in the middle of the woods and there are magic stones involved (somewhat). Haha. Maybe at some point you can be a beta-reader for me as well? How fun! Best wishes on completing your book.

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  3. I like the name you have chosen for your main character.

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    1. Thanks! Here’s an excerpt where she explains it when someone asks why her name is Rose…”Because they were in bloom the day of your birth?” Adam asked.
      “No,” Rose said. “Because of my mother’s pain, like the stab of thorns.”

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  4. A very interesting character.

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    1. Many thanks!

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  5. Interesting gal, that Rose. Strong. A bit scary. Intriguing for sure. 🙂 Well penned.

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    1. Many thanks Na’ama!

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  6. Never underestimate the underachiever. She sounds like a fun character to carry out a story.

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  7. I like this character already!

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    1. Thanks so much! That is encouraging.

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  8. Oh! I want to meet this woman. Thanks for leaving us wondering.

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    1. Thank you, Alicia

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  9. Sounds like Rose has a vision and is set on the path to achieve it.

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  10. Dear Clare,

    There’s obviously more to Rose than meets the eye. Intriguing.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Thank you, Rochelle

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  11. Superstition and science is a great mix for fantasy.

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    1. Thanks James. You gave me a nugget. I need to amp up the superstition part in supporting characters to enhance the truth in the midst.

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    1. Thanks Iain!

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  12. That leaves a lot of questions. very intriguing!

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    1. Questions to be answered are the stuff of a good story no?

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  13. Rose sounds like she might be formidable

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    1. Indeed she is!

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